In groups we needed to make a story about a topic Julia told us: action, love or suspence and we needed to include some elements:
A pink dress
A flurry black monster
A fairy
A hot summer in 1745
I made it with Manuela and Emilia and we needed to make it about suspense.
A lovely girl...
It was a foggy dark night, when Elizabeth Evans was murdered. The detective, Michael Jordan, suspected of the father, Richard Evans. But let's start from the beginning...
It was a very hot summer, in 1745, when Stella McCartney was giving birth her three beautiful triples in her poor house in front of the sea. All the family was very happy, Elizabeth was cleaning all the house to receive the three new babies and Stella’s husband, Richard, was nervous enough to have a heart attack. He was wearing a black pair of trousers, an old pair of brown shoes and a white shirt that match with his old aspect; he had brown eyes and short brown hair. On the other hand, her beautiful wife, Stella, had a curly blond hair, with big green eyes; making her younger. Elizabeth, her daughter, wasn’t as beautiful as her, she was like her father in appearance but that doesn't change that Elizabeth was as generous as the mother.
Daughter and father were waiting in the living room, when a doctor came out of the bedroom, with a very sad face. Minutes later the little family understood why . Only one of the three babies survived! Poor Stella, she was crying with the new integrant of the family in her arms, nobody never knows if the tears were of happiness or sadness.
Two years later, the younger baby of the family, Katherine Evans, but known by her mother Kate, had already 2 years, the little girl loved to talk and play with anyone at anytime. Also, Kate had the most beautiful and generous mother, but her mother with the passing years her big green eyes started to be tired and started to lose that characteristic brightness on them. What was happening to her? She was dying of cancer, but nobody knew it. She went away when his husband smoke, this made her cough. She knew she was ill, but he wanted to keep it secret.
Three years later… Stella is already dead. Everybody was very depressed, but Kate was the one that suffered it more. When her mother died, something changed. She was a little girl of five years old, who nobody was paying attention. She wanted someone to play, to laugh. When it was Kate birthday, Jack and Rachel appeared. Only she, could see them, something wrong was happening to her since her mother died. After talking with his new friends, Kate discovered that they were her sister and brother they died when she was born, also that they couldn’t see, they were blind. That’s the reason why, Jack and Rachel got inside the two favourite toys of Katherine; a little pink fairy and a flurry black monster.
September 21st, 1750.
It was a foggy dark night, when Elizabeth Evans was murdered. Elizabeth died and nobody knew how or why. The only person who realized this was her boyfriend Michael Jordan.They met each other, in a sunny day, when Michael accidentally push Elizabeth with his hurry, he was late for his job. Jordan wanted to kept walking, if he was late one more time, he would be the fired. But, he couldn't let that girl in floor. Michael got closer and helped her. However, this wasn’t the typical love at first seen, Elizabeth instead of saying “Thank you” or “You saved my life” she said “Stupid! In your house taught you to push young ladies!?” Michael started to laugh so hard that the people around saw them like if they were crazy. At the end they worked in the same place, so they saw each other all the days until they fell in love.
When Elizabeth was murdered, Michael became the detective who investigated the crime. He suspected in Elizabeth's dad, Richard. Because Richard went on a business travel the same day of the murdered. Richard never came back, because he knew the truth. Why he didn’t tell it to anyone? Because nobody would trust him.
Here is the truth, the killer is Katherine Evans. Maybe you are wondering how or why a little girl of five years old would kill her own sister? A short answer Jack and Rachel, they convinced Kate of killing her sister. They told her she could be with them and her mother like a family again. Kate believed in them, she went with her mother again… and nobody apart of us knows it. Everyone think that as art of magic the Evan vanished in the air.
The end.
